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You don't know; you don't know anything,
And you can't trust your eyes,
Or your heart,
Or your lungs.

Just wait,
Time will go its way;
Your path will pave itself,
And when the time comes, you'll pass.

Sweet dreams.
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Just something I've been thinking about. I've been watching Heros and I can't help but think that their world is too confusing and doomed. Their future is destined to be terrible yet they continue to fight against it in hopes of something better happening.

Most of them just had random things that made no sense sprung on them, the story manages to stay fairly light hearted but if you really thought about it you would be frustrated and depressed as well. They don't know what is real, what to expect, how well their body will hold up, or if it's actually possible to save the future or only delay the inevitable. It's kinda admirable how hard they fight but it's incredibly annoying how impulsive and irrational they are. I suppose you'd need to be that type of person to survive the circumstances however.
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=slowslicksnails Feb 17, 2013  Student Writer
This piece is really powerful. I could imagine a scene so well, so great job! Definitely fave worthy. :love:
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~whatonearth Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. c:
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=slowslicksnails Feb 17, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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~tisserande-d-encre Aug 20, 2012  Student Writer
This is very nice. ^^ I like the picture you describe, that helplessness you talk about.
I can't imagine life without trusting my own lungs :P
I like how you connected this with the dreams, or maybe it's just my own perception :D
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~whatonearth Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :D

Well it's a figure of speech. ^^; I meant "Sleep well" but that doesn't sound as good. XD I guess that's the thing about writing, it's open to interpretation. c:
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~tisserande-d-encre Aug 20, 2012  Student Writer
Oh I get it :nod:
Yes it is!
Either way, I liked it! ^^
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~whatonearth Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :D
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~TheMoorMaiden Aug 20, 2012  Student Writer
I'm not entirely sure what it is I like about this piece, I just like it. It feels very uplifting, and reading it gave me a sort of 'aw, that's nice' kind of feeling. :XD: Just one thing, I think it should be 'its' rather than 'it's', but other than that I can't see any problems with it. :)
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~whatonearth Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :D This is something that I just randomly came up with but somehow I like it too. Hmm, I see what you mean. Pass can be interpreted two ways. :P Thanks, I'll change it. c:
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~TheMoorMaiden Aug 20, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome. :)
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